So Hard To Nail

Mazzlebizzle

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18 Apr 2013
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Norwich
First Name
Matty
hi guys sorry to keep boring you all with my neotrad struggle. Just looking for some critique.
Is this transferable to skin? Would ANYONE wear it?
 

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dirtnail

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19 May 2017
647
Media
14
Netherlands
First Name
Pieter
Gender
Male
your drawing style is definitely cool. think this piece could benefit from separating foreground from background a bit more, the head gets a bit lost in the leaves and feels is a bit out of proportion to the leaves. right now the leaves dominate the image while the badger should be main subject. could be due to the fact that all shading is concentrated in the bottom...

do think you have an eye for the style and the basis is definitely there. work a bit on composition and focus on the balance between foreground/background, proportion and keeping focus on your subject matter and i bet your designs will improve immensely.

hope this helps...
 
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